DoctorMussels's Profile

The art is ok and it's great to see a story set in the Aztec empire, but oh my god the writing is nonsensical. So many times there are panels that seem out of order, to the point where I thought I was reading it wrong. The way people speak is random and not fitting of the setting or time. A lot of it is extremely corny. I just...I can't abide. I thought that the story underneath all this garbage w as a good idea but the execution is terrible. Yall, get an editor, please! more