The Unchosen #1 poses many questions about its world and its charactersperhaps too many questions. There's nothing wrong with posing questions for the reader, but providing a few answers as well is helpful. A writer should give the reader a few bread crumbs to sate their hunger, yet still keep them hungry for more. If a reader is left with nothing but a hunger, they may look to find food elsewhere. It is a curious beginning to a new world and story.