Leo Roa - Slightly Oversized Edition #1

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• 9.7

  Florida Geek Scene - Jesse Scheckner

  May 21, 2014

  Its purely a minor quibble, but one thing stood out as a tad problematic. Though this occurred less in the second book than it did in the first (however that mightve just been my adjusting to it), some of the word balloon structure or lack thereof was a bit confusing in parts, forcing me to have to go back and reread certain portions to make sure I got things right. None of it was so jarring that I felt removed from the story far enough to put me off of it, but its worth noting anyway. Read Full Review